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Such a well-wrought story. Thank you for sharing it! Entirely worthy of being published somewhere.

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thank you! I tried to have it published but it just didn’t fit anywhere I could find, so I figured I’d publish here on Substack at least so it didn’t waste away in a virtual file drawer :)

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I love this!

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and this is the edited, improved version of the original you read! :D With links this time to all the music!

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Including a playlist is brilliant!

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you inspired it for me :) I had already listened to the songs anyway to make sure they fit what I wanted them to do for the story, and when you asked me back when you alpha read the first draft about Sao Gan, I thought others might like to hear the songs too, so I edited my post to put the links in :D

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I feel like I've seen this somewhere before....

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you did! you alpha read this one for me - this is the final edited version after I incorporated all your suggestions :D

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That explains why it's so brilliant...lol

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This was so evocative!!

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thank you! :)

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Loved it!

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